Monday, May 4, 2009

Insted of sayin a student can i say the student i dont get it please help?

insted of saying a student every time can i say he or she or the student. i need help





When a student is preparing for a job interview, there are several things that (the student) they can do to improve their his first impression and, thus, their chances at getting the job First, the (student) they should make sure to confirm all details of the interview well before the scheduled date. Then Them checking to make sure that (The student) they have the time and location correct is imperative . They (the student) should also firm up other last minute details, such as the name of the human resources director or person conducting the interview and specific address information, such as a particular building or office number

Insted of sayin a student can i say the student i dont get it please help?
When a student is preparing for a job interview, there are several things that he can do to improve his first impression and, thus, his chances at getting the job first. He should make sure to confirm all details of the interview well before the scheduled date. Then Them checking to make sure that he has the time and location correct is imperative . The student should also firm up other last minute details, such as the name of the human resources director or person conducting the interview and specific address information, such as a particular building or office number








Use the generic "he"
Reply:It is probably politically correct to say "he or she," and then use your chosen gender within the context of the letter.


Good luck,


Julie Report It

Reply:Yes, you can say "the student" in something like this. You first refer to "a student" because the first sentence is non-specific -- that is, it applies to all students in general. Further on, you are talking about one particular student, the imaginary one you have selected as your interviewee. Therefore, you can refer to him/her as "the student". Hope this helps!
Reply:I will edit your paragraph but if it isn't right I did my best.





When a student is preparing for a job interview, there are several things that can be done to improve the prospective employer's first impression of him, thus increasing the chance for employment.





Confirming the date and details of the scheduled interview is the first step to ensure success. This includes the right time and location where the interview will take place. Knowing the name of the interviewer and the position held within the company is also beneficial. A quick study of what type of industry and the type of service offered by the company the student is applying for shows that he has taken the time to gain knowledge and will show his interest in gaining this employment.





There you are, I don't think you need to know about the building and or office number of the interviewer as you may not work for this individual at all, know what qualifications are required for the position you are applying for. Hope this helped.
Reply:Let me rewrite this paragraph for you:





When a student is preparing for a job interview, there are several ways to improve one's first impression and chances at getting the job. First, the student should make confirm all details of the interview well before the scheduled date. Then he should check to make sure that the location is correct and there is sufficient. The student should also re-check other last minute details, such as the name of the human resources director or the person intending to conduct the interview and specific addresses, such as a particular building or office number.





Good luck!!
Reply:maybe make the first "student" plural cuz u refer constantly to them or they, which is plural. maybe say student once or twice instead of they or them, and take out the words in the parenthesis
Reply:yes in most cases above they or their works fine....
Reply:I'm a transcription editor. In your opening line, you've already established the following paragraph is referring to students. Make your point more clear and concise. I took the liberty of editing your paragraph:





"When a student is preparing for a job interview, there are several things that can be done to improve their first impression and, thus, their chances at obtaining the position. First, make sure to confirm all details of the interview well before the scheduled date. It is imperative to ensure the time and location is correct. Firm up other last minute details, such as the name of the human resources director or person conducting the interview as well as specific address information, such as a particular building or office number."
Reply:Stick with the student. If you use he or she you will offend half the population depending on which one you use. They is plural and doesn't belong in this paragraph.


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